A Promise Comments
She gives him a cloud of parrots
He expects her to peel the carrots
She gives him a safari cruise
He expects her to hide the bruise
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Time to fly next time this poor specimen of a man raises a hand. Pack his bags in a garbage bag. Life is so much better than this! !
Congratulations again for being chosen this poem for second time as the member poem of the poem of the day.
DOUBLE CONGRATULATIONS being chosen TWICE, same date another year. Since you are woman, I am very proud of you and I know the situations you had been in so well. I had been been to your area and to many many parts of Down Under. Amazing Country Continent. You write excellent poems, Ali. That you must know.
Because if too much silence, then this amazing ironical poem full of cynical notes was born. So true. Man must not abuse his life partner, IF still so, then such things as in this poem can happen. Be alerted, man! This woman is smarter than you think., hey man! A most deserving Modern Poem Of The Day! CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as TMPOTD. Hurray for Ali! A 10 Full Score and myriad of 10´s more. God´s Blessings.
A relationship of broken dreams and utter ugliness....so very well expressed. It is admirable in its poetic imagination and style.
He gives her a rotting plum She expects a little freedom He gives her his silver spoon She expects she’ll kill him soon........touching and impressive expression with nice theme. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
A sad but relatively true poem reflecting some bad relationships? ......well written Ali
This is how a relationship can become dangerous. Very nicely done with a smooth style. Liked it.
Life can never be free of Clashing interests of individuals, even in love -life. Depending on the nature of relationship, understanding would perhaps, make things easier. Thought provoking poem, indeed. Congrats for your being positioned high. Thanks for sharing
The rawness of the verse reflects the tough relationship it portrays.
Expectation and reception, sometimes in individual twin soul, stand as opposition political parties /// nice poem
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She and He is together a life of peace