*did You Pay To Them To Click On You? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

When one is angry, his heart creates and excels, that's what you are doing. Keep your pen busy.

within an hour you will reach by your army you will be on top of all, poetry kids killedby you click and click shot, and shot with no rule my goal is loving ones being mate with my soul, congrat. for your fall again a good piece with reality touches.. well done dear tamara 10/10

oh my that was soul wretching yet so true...wisely put into a poem with so much feeling and expression..10

Poetry is not about numbers that any proficient user can tally-up at the blink of an eye...It doesen't serve as testimony to quality....not on this site. The TOP 500Poet's list is a flong-used scam, mostly by bopers who think that by padding their daily velocity performance, that it will somehow reap gold literary seeds for them. This could not be further from the truth...Poetic Truth comes from within the core & fibers of the hear which feeds off the right halve dominance of the human mind. Case in point is: Take a look as to who has more than 6,000 I.P. hits.....now check how many poems they have had on site over the past 2 weeks.....In the past week, (alegedly) , this individual with 3 names in one(The unholy trinity, i call him) has actually increased his daily padding ritual since he stopped posting....Now, is this person 52 cards short of a full deck or what? lol! Anyway, we should all self-promote to a degree...and all of us should take pride in overachievement....and no one should think us aloof for wanting others to know how excited we may be about our achievement(s) .Keep that pen pumping, young lady & concentrate on topic & theme that will display the gifts you have, as a writer....Pay no mind to numbers, as they hold no poetic value, HERE.....And instead, pay all your mind to words, your words & the creative way you choose to structure them. FjR

wow great poetry with much of emotions help em inspire too i need support * I Need Poems Translator (in another tounge) Fellow poets around the world, It's my pleasure to inform you all that at last I have found a kind-hearted publisher and as part of our project, he suggested me that if possible some of my hits poems should be tranlated into another foreign languages or tribal dialects. Would you might to translate one of my original poems preferably of your own choice? With your consent, I truthfully include your respective name and your painstakingly translated poem in my ever-dream book of poetry. (December this year is our target month for the book launching) We believe as a poets that not only temperament and a common anguish unite writers but also a PARTICULAR PLACE, A PARTICULAR TOUNGE! Sincerely yours, RMD Marchan, Philippines email me thru: marchanjet@yahoo.com ROMMEL MARK DOMINGUEZ MARCHAN

good poem. may be ignore some spelling mistakes..its quite ok

There is much truth in this. True poets write for themselves, and not in hopes of fleeting glory. For it is so fleeting, this time we have. And our words are our descendants. Excellent! xxxxElys

slowly, slowly as snail reach my goal your name made by cheating tomorrow soon it will fall, ............... i think you are on loosing trail..giving so much .good piece...10

GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ERRORS? DON'T BE DISRESPECTING THIS CHILD'S 'CULTURE' AFTER ALL, THEY DON'T TEACH ENGLISH IN THE HOOD ANYMORE. THEY TEACH: UMM, UMM, MMM! BARACK HUSSEIN OBAMA!

Right Tamara! I don't often do this but you brought your poetry to my attention and I am going to give my opinion. This is a good poem if it were not for all the grammer and spelling errors... I also note the sheer volume of comments on this and other pieces you bring to our attention...I guess you have been heavily promoting your work? Not a bad thing, but it doesn't prove your popularity. You certainly do not need my added opinion, and if you do ask for it, I would be grateful, as I am sure many other of your readers would too, if you present such offerings, in the best possible light. No offence meant. All the best to you in your poetic future Smiling at you Tai