Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.
I wish to cradle this feeling,
that has only just been found,
A feeling that has unexpectedly
turned my world around.
Do not depart, Oh please remain
within my heart awhile,
So that I can savour you once more,
and hold you in my smile.
Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. Nicely penned. 10++
Marvelously conceived stunning yet very simple poem. Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day.
Remain with me deep within let this smile stay. lovely poem Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile.
So profound! Every reader will remember the memory of their first kiss when s/he reads this poem. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Modern Poem of the Day’!
Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. /// a heartiest loving poem penned; from the core of heart the love has been expressed; this beautiful smile; this uttered the soft voice, this arm, this beautiful surrounding; this neat and clean all only for the love and living with the peaceful heart; an enjoyable loving poem
A feeling that has unexpectedly turned my world around. Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. Beautiful poem.