Inside that feeling of depression..........
It's not just a silly superstiotion...........
It's hard to make this confession........
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Sitting alone.......
in my dark creepy room..........
and that abhorrent feeling
is eating my soul.................
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For standing by me all the way..........
For helping me through the awful day..............
For being always there for me...........
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I will never forget you my dearest soulmate..
these old meomries will never fade...
you've always laid me in your shade...
whenever I trembled or felt afraid....
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If my life is a big horrible lie....................
If my little bird will never get to fly..............
If the smoky clouds have never left the sky......
If my grade had never been high...............
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That day when you said: good bye my lover..
that hurtful word was killing me inside..
Oh my love.......I'm in tears days and nights..
Oh my love.......I'm living acreepy life......
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Buried Alive
Inside that feeling of depression..........
It's not just a silly superstiotion...........
It's hard to make this confession........
I'm buried alive.................
I believe that no one can help me to survive.............................
I'm sick of this pathetic life...............
and i think it's all based on a horrible big lie..................
still there..laying there
inside that fearful place.....
where a feeling of death hung upon the air..........
oh god this's so unfair.............
my life has become an abhorrent endless nightmare................
inside that gloomy place..
where every thing is dark and..........
and the sun will never shine upon my pale face................
oh god how can i get rid of all these choking scares? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
how can i get out of this frightening place............
so hard to get rid of the weight of thise feeling laying inside my brittle poor heart...........
this feeling of depression it makes me fall apart..........
I think I like YOU....there's a certain sweetness there....but I'm unsure as to where I stand on the poetry....I'm not a fan of structured poetry that adheres strictly to ryhme schemes etc. and yours aren't that...but I don't know, I just find it simplistic and repetitive sometimes....having said that, I find it to be really alive.....you have confused me emo girl.I'm jealous of your popularity....maybe I'm lashing out :)
There is so much emotion in your poems. I hope you write some more. Obviously you're networked well in your school or country and you deserve to be. Meggie.
hey, ur poems are relly good, especially my dearest soulmate, if u get an opportunity, could you have a read of one of mine? thanks and well done on great poetry
Hei I happened to read this and i enjoyed it. I ask almost everybody this but what inspired you to make this poem or song up?
I'm not sure how you managed to become number 1 in popularity here on poemhunter but well done. The only question I have is, why so many periods? Almost every line seems to end in '..............' is your period key sticky? did you spill something in there? Just curious. Take Care, -Hunter Dasten
Darkness consumes, Darkness obtains, The reason why we are in tombs. Or stuck in the rain. Another soul like me. All captured, none are free. Your work touches me. Stuck in the darkness, No chance to flee. The truth is i admire you, You have lit my flame anew. And the only thing I can give you. Is a good luck, and a thank you