I visit doctor
for myself and my family
to clean the illness out,
I clean my nail, hair and body,
I sweep my table, room, house...
and spider webs
inside my head
until I am cleaned into dust.
This is a statement of truth, written with much appeal. Well Done. Greetings from Cornwall U, K.
what ever arouses the feelings through its beauty and affection...is a poem, a nice gesture.. **Abha**
I have absolutely no idea what this means. You have befuddled me completely - well done!
a wonderful write! loved the way you write 'poem'. a 10
a blissful way of saying a beautiful poem is like a wonderful life. jolly writing.
Your poem gives the thrilling sensation of the story of a novel called life!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Life is not to be wasted, we should enjoy each moment. Each dawn a challenge to live this day to its fullest. This is a poem to remind us all of this. Bob