It Is Your Smile… Poem by Hebert Logerie

It Is Your Smile…

Rating: 4.7


Woman, let me demystify you,
So I can see why I love you
So much.
Let me search:
The curves, the preserves,
The gardens and the reserves,
So I can understand
Why every second
That you flash in my memory,
The chemical formula changes in my body.

Turn around;
You're safe and sound.
Let me examine you from head to toes:
Touch your nose,
Cover your cheeks,
Do some tricks,
Try to fake it,
Walk, run, stop and sit.
Oh! I'm beginning to see:
It is your smile
That drives me crazy;
It is your smile
That makes me feel so good.
Oh! My soul
Is engaged in a chaotic feud;
I wonder if you are the divine doll
That I dreamt of the other night.
You are out of sight.
Your smile drives me crazy,
Every day and every night,
When I am lonely,
When the sky is gloomy or bright
And when you gaze at me.

It Is Your Smile…
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shay Riggin 31 August 2009

flowed wuth ease. sounds like you were very inspired poem. i gave it a much deserved 10! ! keep writing you are doing a wonderful job!

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Deependra Kumar Jha 24 August 2009

nicely penned poem. loved it.10

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Janri Gogeshvili 24 August 2009

True enthusiasm... Charming for the addressee ... /10

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Deepti Agarwal 24 August 2009

A sweet one... yes indeed the her smile and your words describing it goes well blended..

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Ravi Sathasivam 23 August 2009

Beautiful poem with harmonious lines. Well penned. Thanks for sharing with me

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Congratulations, Dear Poet. This very interesting poem is selected as one of the Best Poems of Members.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

Curves, preserves Gardens and the reserves. Beautiful, highly romantic

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

Very nice love poem. Captivating. I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 March 2020

It is your smile That drives me crazy; It is your smile That makes me feel so good. Oh! My soul..../// beautiful love is expressed here// excellent

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2019

It is your smile That drives me crazy; It is your smile That makes me feel so good. Oh! My soul Is engaged in a chaotic feud; infatuation and the so called love and its experiences. tony

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