*moon Rapes His Sister Sun Poem by nimal dunuhinga

*moon Rapes His Sister Sun

Rating: 2.9


In the pitch darkness strange things can happen;
But unfortunately nowadays it happens in the daylight too.

* The title quoted from the book ' American Indian myths and legends' selected and edited by Richard Erdoes and Alfonso Ortiz.
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(This violent story tells of a stormy encounter between a female sun and a male moon.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rosa Banks 29 November 2009

wow no dur things can happen in the dark but ok good i guess it gets strait to the point good try!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

Wonderful 10+++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 07 April 2009

few lines tell the characteristric of modern age..............

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Anjali Sinha 09 February 2009

amazing--- the narration of the tragedy in just a few lines +++10 anjali

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 October 2008

It's amazing, love it with 10.

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Swajeet Kumar Trivedi 28 November 2017

Have a nice time to read this poetry have a heart beat languagetowards the haven scene.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 February 2010

Uncontrolled and unguided gratification …psychopaths are in plenty… Excellent Caption...congrat… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Ken E Hall 09 February 2010

The brevity of the poem speaks out loud and clear worthy of top marks.. regards

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Pradyumna Jyotir 28 January 2010

So much conveyed with so little. A poem very well crafted.The brevity is dynamic as it is powerful. Thank you for sharing.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 December 2009

I don't know how to reply to this one.More food for thought.

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