there's the sea
there's the sky
the moon and the wind too
a picture perfect setting
for you and i
but
you aren't you
i'm not i
inheritors of the promordial fire
we're just the carriers of the
principle that governs nature
to probe and penetrate
the mysterious and mystic
depths and spaces
teasing man for eons
to undo all the knots
to unravel our existence
at each penetration
at each probing
to reach that fleeting moment
of non-existence
severed from the body connect
detached from the earth-bounds
the elements will never cease
the fire will keep burning
but
you'll not be you
and i'll not be i
07jun2010
12.40hrs
Perfect.! ...........under one roof two chracters live as one but there are two souls?
While it is true that there is nothing new under the sun, this is a very compelling piece of work. Excellent, Indira. Love, Sandra
:) . and one thing is diffinite about me, God breathe life into me. :) . the rest, the flesh is belongs to the universe. but that soul of mine, is the lords.. :) . the poem has some truth. :) . the carbon is you may have been shared by einstein or newton, or King Solomon. :)
there's the sea there's the sky the moon and the wind too a picture perfect setting for you and i but you aren't you i'm not i inheritors of the promordial fire we're just the carriers of the principle that governs nature - - - - - - - -A wonderful poem of love and nature.We are governed by the forces of nature.
The second and the last stanzas are marvellous. The inevitable trends of live have been effectively implied.
the elements will never cease the fire will keep burning but you'll not be you and i'll not be i Wonderful and thought-provoking lines!
'to reach that fleeting moment of non-existence' Rachel Ann Butler
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
extremly well and well appealing. marks 10