Your Eyes Poem by indira babbellapati

Your Eyes

Rating: 2.9


in the seas of your eyes
i see the reflection of
the sun rise and
the sun set
at the same time
i also see the sparkling high tide
of a full-moon night
and splinters of glassy waves
of a bright summer day
i see the mysterious depths
of the sea i can never negotiate
hidden behind the fluidy veil
that protects the whites of your eyes

i stroll along
the enigmatic
sands of your shore
at all times of the day
and the night

30sep2009
19.58hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 07 October 2009

Lucky you, the poet, who can see two seas and the sun rise and the sun set at the same time looking into someone's eyes! Beautiful poem!

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 06 October 2009

Got omni vision still Poet quests for more and …well let poet say in next poem. Nice ten dr.sakti Cordially invite to my page. ds

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Obinna Eruchie 05 October 2009

The love in his eyes you see is expressed beautifully.

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Pitilosi Mdala 05 October 2009

This poem is against infidelity, is quite, super and wonderful.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2009

beautiful mystic disclosure! nice phrasology!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009

In you eyes … I see many unseen things too. Nice poem Didi Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

I see the mysterious depths Rachel Ann Butler

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Patrick A. Martin 09 October 2009

I remember this when I looked into the eyes of my children thank you dear Indira

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Allemagne Roßmann 09 October 2009

Pleasure of a moment lasts for a moment Pleasures collected from pain makes the moment..... a good write!

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

A loving and caring soul you have seeing the deep reflection of one's eyes! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great poem indeed! ! ! ! Love it! ! ! ! ! !

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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