' A Poem That Woke Me Up! ' Comments

Nice write.Soulful lines

Every reading of this poem fills me with love of the words and emotions spilling out so beautifully.

Absence create a big vacuum and longings. Beautiful poem

Every night I bury tear for you In my heart That quenches my heart's thirst

This wonderful poem takes me in a journey so ehereal! Absence can fill you with someone's presence and silence can connect without speaking a word!

So beautiful and heartwarming.

Wow your grea5

Congratulations, dear poet. This poem ranks #One among the Best Poems of Members

That absence occupies me......it's very hard to measure its volume.

I dwell In the absence You left behind These are beautiful words but gives me bad memories

I dwell In the absence You left behind That absence occupies me I dabble In the silence You fill me with That's my silent connect - - - - - - - - - - -

he will definitely come oneday i am sure the hand tousled your hair still twitches for you...thanks indira for the melodious lines....atp

You have a lot of sensitive feelings I feel you hold back on these concepts Afraid perhaps or not willing to share them Keep expressing yourself comfort start with one self

And absolute silence to reckon with while u wake up....trez bien!

Indira, was going through your poems....really nice Keep it up.

nice poem i liked it

...absolutely beautiful Indira, the bearing of your soul in words. Love, Jerry

This is a heartfelt poem indeed. An absence that has triggered beautiful lines! May hope stay with you, and may real presence flood your heart and mind with happy threads!