Exiled on the isle of passion and shackled in the prison of craving.
Bottled up emotion - screaming and shouting and searching for an escape.
Like a dehydrated deer tracking water -Like a desert hunting an oasis.
Deluge of flames enrapture my being with the fervor of a thousand fire.
Tranquillized by cloud of restraint yet burning with the inferno of love.
Raining from the sky of my being- cascading from my connubial essence.
Sunshine from the hub of my heart, moistens my lips in the dew of desire.
Pregnant with the passion of the sun and birthing the beauty of a rose.
Visuality captures my appetite like predator pouncing on prey.
Tenderly touching - meticulously massage like a cool breeze in summer.
Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone, lips of my lips, tongue of my tongue.
Giving and receiving, urging and merging, tightening and heightening.
Sugar cane and honey splashed together-overflowing into a river of release.
Floating on ecstasy, as time stands still to salute the creation of art.
ya you are correct its really fantastic keep writing »so close«
you have beautiful style, and shining words, thank you for sharing with us your poems.well done.
Deep and powerful! A great reservoir of rich words and imagery! Definitely your best! 10+++ Thank you sharing and keep it up! Your talent is so clearly shown in this amazing write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
Totally loved the flip-flop in this line- - -Like a dehydrated deer tracking water -Like a desert hunting an oasis. That was clever and explored even deeper. The word choices were very very sensual. This is a bouquet of 10's and onto fav list! ! ! !
A fantastic expression has been made on kiss, love and nature having nice penmanship. Each and every line is much enchanted. I want to quote few lines here..... Tranquillized by cloud of restraint yet burning with the inferno of love. ........ ........ ....... Tenderly touching - meticulously massage like a cool breeze in summer. Flesh of my flesh, bone of my bone, lips of my lips, tongue of my tongue. This poem goes to my poems list. Thanks,10.
Another great write so captivating and interesting never a dull moment from start to finish. Love it
A very interesting mix of thoughts and experiences wrapped up in a kiss. It makes you think, that a kiss is never just a kiss.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It is indeed an extremely good poem Howard! A great write that makes me re live some of my best kisses as I read! That's clever when a poem can do that! Great use of similes and powerful imagery. It reads smoothly with beautiful flow! Mmmmmmmm!