' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Blameless Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Blameless

Rating: 2.7


I blame myself
(yes me...me entirely)

for falling
in love

with you
(what else could I do?)

It wasn't as if
I had a choice

I just went and fell
blatantly in love with you

without
a second thought

for myself.

Could have got
badly mauled

or given everything
(and got nothing at all)

but then
the blame

rests
entirely on you

for falling in love with
...me too!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 09 December 2023

After deepest thoughts of thinking, BOTH are to be blamed for, NO ONE is blameless. Excellently rendered poem.5 *****

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Bharati Nayak 06 September 2023

Such a beautiful poem on bitter-sweet feelings of love!

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Bharati Nayak 06 September 2023

(Part-2) -Is he only to blame himself for it? Is his lover blameless? No, blame turns on her as she has made the mistake of falling in love!

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Bharati Nayak 06 September 2023

What a beauty is this poem! When one falls in love and trapped in its sweetness and heartache, he/she feels there is no way he can come out of it! He blames himself for it! (Part-1)

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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