' A Poem That Woke Me Up! ' Poem by indira babbellapati

' A Poem That Woke Me Up! '

Rating: 2.7

I dwell
In the absence
You left behind

That absence occupies me

I dabble
In the silence
You fill me with

That's my silent connect

This heart
Still sings
The moonlight sonata of yore

That silent score sustains me

My breath
Still draws in
The perfume dabbed on this skin

That silently nurtures hope in me

Every night
I bury tear for you
In my heart

That quenches my heart's thirst

Jerry Hughes 23 January 2012

...absolutely beautiful Indira, the bearing of your soul in words. Love, Jerry

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Maria C. Pires Costa 02 November 2011

This is a heartfelt poem indeed. An absence that has triggered beautiful lines! May hope stay with you, and may real presence flood your heart and mind with happy threads!

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Karen I Banks 16 April 2012

nice poem i liked it

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Aasiq the poet 15 November 2013

he will definitely come oneday i am sure the hand tousled your hair still twitches for you...thanks indira for the melodious lines....atp

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Alexander Coppedge 26 March 2013

You have a lot of sensitive feelings I feel you hold back on these concepts Afraid perhaps or not willing to share them Keep expressing yourself comfort start with one self

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Jaishree Nair 06 December 2023

Nice write.Soulful lines

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Savita Tyagi 08 November 2023

Every reading of this poem fills me with love of the words and emotions spilling out so beautifully.

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Kingsley Egbukole 07 September 2023

Absence create a big vacuum and longings. Beautiful poem

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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2023

Every night I bury tear for you In my heart That quenches my heart's thirst

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Bharati Nayak 16 August 2023

This wonderful poem takes me in a journey so ehereal! Absence can fill you with someone's presence and silence can connect without speaking a word!

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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